DP2 Moving Images - Film Ambient Vapour

Our film is finally done!

Ambient Vapour


I am quite pleased with it. As it is our first "professionally-done film", I would say it worked quite well.
There were a few feedback last seminar about our film that could be improved-

• Too many zoom in's-

Some of the zooming in was meaningless, it's not necessarily needed,

Zoom in shots should be done in 3 separate shots instead of 1 continuous zoomed in shot, so the scene could be clearer

• The audio was good, but Jools suggested us to put the mystery music in some other part of the film as well, so the mystery feel continues as the film goes along.
• Repeated some scenes, as the film was inverse, repeat some scene will make the film clearer and makes more sense